Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

ImaSoldier 304
structure is ok.. flow is on target.. no multis.. no good wordplay.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

¤ÐÅž¤
structure is good.. flow is on target.. a few multis.. wordplay is pretty good.. some of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. neither had good personals.. ¤ÐÅž¤ had more multis.. better wordplay.. and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. ¤ÐÅž¤ gets my vote..

VOTE - ¤ÐÅž¤

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