Voted For: Xponant

damn...this was hard to vote. Both verses didn't bring much. Need more punches. And some wordplay. I only gave u this vote cause your structure was better. But you need some punches or somethin to make your verse better. You got da structure down pack no work on the punches and wordplay and shit. Dom you had no punches at all. I think I saw one, but that was it. You gotta work on your structure and change it around or somethin. Try to make da lines equal. Keep it up you'll get better. Your gettin there from what I see.