Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS

You got this...structure was there...punches was better. Stunna your structure needs work. That paragraph stuff is kinda hard to read. As it's all bunched up...and hard to tell weither or not wat words ur rhymin. But you had ideads and some ok vocab. Structure is really the only thing u need to work on. Hollow your elevating from da last battle I seen u in.