yea,.,, it ok... some lines were streched.. but still fit on beat i s'pose... lol... some lines didn't even rhyme together, like you jus slapped random thoughts together... such as "Try to write 39 lines its hard to hit the harder notes/.
Now this is my very first song that I have ever released/
I hope my style dosent die down and become deceased/.
If that happened I would get mad and stunt out herbs/"

like the release, deceased lines fine, and herbs goes wit the line after, but they don't connect in any way ... work on that shit,.,, 1... where in canada u from?, i'm in Tdot

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