thnx for the feed man..but i only used shit 3 times...the words written before "shit" was the rhyme..but adding shit just gives it a diffrent style in the song..and the same goes with the other words man..i wasnt using the same three words as my rhmes..lol.check the words before them ..they are the rhyme..
and did i mention .....they still "unsure"..
why they even went to "war".....
didnt understand the reason's to be "preventing" it "for"...
i hate where i live.."mum why are we "renting" for?"
i had no choice to sin.."why am i "repenting" for"
th for is a carry on from ..unsure..war..but before them i rhyme preventing.renting.repenting..so it gives it that better flow and i nacer sound....if this was audio ..when i spit it i would make each syllable clear..pre-vent-ing-for...ren-ting-for..re-pent-ing-for..
you see? it gives more of a flow..

anyway thnx for the feed man..any1 else with any thoughts on this?

pz

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