The Original Half Ass King
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Voted For: Empire
Opener - Empire, good use of opponents name...
Closer - Neither, thought both were weak...
Punches - Empire, Forsakens were not as strong...
Personals - Forsaken, whole verse seemed to be personals...
Multies - Empire, had mad multies...
Metas - Tie, both had good metaphors...
Structure - Tie, both were neat and organized, look good...
Vocab - Empire, not for nessecarily havin bigger words, just more tech and descriptive...
Forsaken: I guess it was kinda creative to try battling against the picture of your opponent. Ill give you that much but I thought you coulda done a better job man. Work on multies and better punches instead of so many personals.
Empire: All around pretty good verse, just work on throwin some more crafty/witty punchlines and wordplay in that and youll have these battles no prob.
Close battle, props to both, no hate...this vote goes to Empire...
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