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Old 09-07-04, 11:25 AM   #8
Abraxas
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Voted For: lyricalflowz

Both of you came good iight battle nice verses
Lyrical: your shit was nice good verse overall nice lnies some funny one too you had funny but good personals made mer ROFL ok punches though though you could do some rewording init yuou hade nice good strucutre and ok flow

Ice Pick: ya shit was iight to you had some messed up strucutre and ok flow ya punches were iight and same with ya personals

VOte: Lyrical for a better verse

Close battle

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