Yo you had alot of nice lines in there,,
but heres the line i liked very much,,because its very sad
You created a vision in my mind as I read it,,daum near can make any one quit smoking


Lately things have changed and aren’t the same as before...
It's harder to breath with these machines.. my lungs are sore
I can barely sit up.. without pain, and if I do.. I spit up-
Blood, like a fountain of rain..

10-10 ,nice drop because its the truth,

feed back is viser verser hers my link on my truth
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147764

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My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
none