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Old 09-07-04, 12:10 PM   #11
Abraxas
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Voted For: intensify effect

ok... nice battle very good
IE: you had a nie verse all cool and shit nice lines nice overall you had ok strucutre nice flow ya personald were ight knd of and so were ya punchse youcould have done some rewording thoughbut nice shit some concept were playedf though

Yvoone: nice verse too ya had messedup stuructre though but ya flow was igiht ok punches and perosnals

VOte IE for a bettewr verse overall
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