Thread: Im Back(bitch)
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Old 07-09-02, 01:50 PM   #2
MC4Eyez
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This was decent. I thought that there were some tight lines, and some played lines. The flow started off kind of weak, but then picked up when you added some multis near the middle and the end. Overall, it was pretty good, but my main complaint is that all you did was state that you were the best and that all your opponents would lose to you. There was no creative twist on it that made it better than any other rhyme on that topic.

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why u shakin stop waitin i double dare u tah pull it
That was nice.

Peace
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