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Old 09-07-04, 09:06 PM   #50
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Voted For: schema

this isn't the hottest verse I've seen from either of you....but in my oppinion..schema won....

ya verse is like 5 minutes of nothing...ill take a nap if i wanna waste time
the site gon crash about 5 minutes after you drop ya lame rhyme...
its hard on the servers when someone gets 50 votes at the same time
come up with some new shit...you got damn near 50 posts with the same rhyme...

pretty good few lines....i liked the bottom couplet..i was chucklin over that


I come original...fake thug shit's played cuz believe it
my shits so fresh you gotta update ya monitors to see it

thats also a dope line in my oppinion...those 3 couplets were the outliers in this battle...those won it over....and raw killa....you need to fix your structure...you had some okay punches....but to me...it seemed like you had NO flow..and i could of read it wrong...but you can't blame me with that fucked up structure...anyways..much respect...schema gets my vote
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