This is nice, vocab and knowledge was explored, nice wordplay and imagery put through this... I didnt like how ya formatted the verse, space ya bars out, its more easier to read and follow, but thats a minor... The rhythm was on point, the multies kept syllable nice, some internal rhymes I noticed... The wordplay and vocab combined bought some imagery together, knowledge words were well used and described, I was feeling it... Got lost on where you were going sometimes, more substance to your verse woulda made this flawless, you got a good style, hope ta see more of your work in the future... Feeling this, keep dropping the gems...

Peez...