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Old 09-07-04, 09:57 PM   #10
DrasticMeasureZ
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nice flow and punches from both sides

dis an great verse upfront from u since.............. um eva lol

legends

now when i win this shit i plan to get my money upfront
the tech wet ya lips like ya fcae was part of a cunt
roll ya body up in a black bag leave u smoking like a blunt
lyrics put a bump on ya face like an std lump// nice punch

u the type that be praying to get raped by a priest
the rhino tips leave ya head on the ground like an anti-freeze leak
u prewrite ya shit that's why u put the drop time for "almost-a-week"
ya lyrics tire me boy i'm "falling-asleep"
lyrics dig down deep into ya nervous system// true true punches and personals

strike a few vital arteries then ya nerves start twitching
i got niggas giving me thumbs up on this battle like a hitch hiker hitching
u from philly then u know how them "guns-bust"
snap my finger like a wizard lyrics lay u out with "one-touch"// ha ha ha talkin about yo peoples upfront

u beating me it ain't happening soon
leave footprints on ya face like i walked on the moon
i need a girl like p.diddy so u gonna be my bitch like loon// ehhhhh not good

get off tupac's dick u never saw him on your's
ya rhymes get very little business like a corner store// um u gettin weak

u was born whore so why u trying to be a man
i kill u upfront then go on to killing b.a.m
leave ya head in bag like dope with kilograms
have ya girl in my bed saying "oh boy" like Killa cam// ehhh punches were weak

cross my path i'll let the heater spray in all directions
bitch u couldn't come harder even if u had an erection// nope not good closa

8/10

upfront

ayo ....two sets one f0o ya
end ya career that neva started like tha great hova/
talkin bout rollin thru wit gats lemme find muh range rova/
runnin up da score jus quit da games ova/
put da clip to ya mellon i aint gay but ill still blow ya/ HA HA HA PUNCH NICE

games done it was from da beginnin/
u act like u had a chance nigga im grinnin/
i see right thru ya shit like loose linnen/
lyrical masta mind preachin rhymes like religion/ DAYUM KO!!!

afraid ta sho ya record cuz ill make a nigga cry/
oops muh bad shotya in ya chess made ya shirt tie dye/
slice ya neck make ya talk....can u say bye bye/(hah)
naw ima sneak up on ya and skid out wit a drive by/
or snipe y0o ass from a jet sumthin like a fly by/
da F B I found ya but i got da gov whipped s0o they lemme slide by/ ITS AN AIGHT PUNCH

now im off and runnin from da kid wit aids/
twist a livin legend legs start ta looks like braids /
run game on ya grl like im dishin out plays/
get m0o head than a koofie g0 hide away/
odds of u winnin dis battle keeps niggas in dismay/
thas like sayin a jews gunna celebrate the christmas holiday/ DARE I SAY IT KO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HMMMMMMM LIVIN LEGEND U WERE GOOD NICE VERSE MAYNE FO SHO NO BEEF

UPFRONT KEEP AT IT CAUSE IT LOOKS LIKE U ELEVATIN (NOT J/P)

UPFRONT GOT MY VOTES CAUSE OF DECENT PUNCHES AND WORDPLAYS FROM BEGINNING TO DA END

LIVIN U WAS GOOD NICE PUNCHES BUT U WENT FROM GOOD TO BAD TO WORSE

BUT KEEP AT IT

KEEP WRITTING
KEEP SPITTIN
AND STAY ACTIVE

~PEACE~
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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