The actual message was deep, and it was well thought out, I liked how ya bought your ideas in... The verse was quite simplistic though, more wordplay woulda made this a winner... The rhythm was nice, quite simplistic style, but you come through, would like to see more internal rhymes, that should smoothen everything up... Vocab was aight, it was a solid and decent spit, but simplistic, work on some complexity and thought into ya rhymes... Keep spitting and elevating, feeling the ideas though...

Peez...