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Voted For: Paramik
Get blown away by Frances, this mother fucker has no chance…
Cause his lines already garbage bagged up, just like his pants.
I agree he makes an ass out of himself his weight makes him fall…
Kid says that his lines are fully assed?, must not have any at all.
I mean your wack, ya punches and structure is like dog shit in a pile…
Your crap redefined, ya verse more messed up than ludas hairstyle….
I'm whipping this class clown, like what they used to do at his school…
It’s just like the days before Lent, the way I'm Passing OVER this fool!
What a weak punk, even the pussy cats not afraid of what you do.
Learn the truth, nobody fears you, even my cat flips the finger at you.
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breakdown:
lines were aight, closure was a filler(cat line) rhymes were original for the most part, had nice word play...
best punch:I'm whipping this class clown, like what they used to do at his school…
It’s just like the days before Lent, the way I'm Passing OVER this fool!
^^nice comdedy...shotta boy's verse was wack n all, had horrible opening which made me lose focus on his rhymes quick. no challenge, due to these causes...
vote: paramik
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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