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Old 09-08-04, 07:15 AM   #13
Sean Gunner
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Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS

dang... not hard vote. Hollow u were better overall. structure hollow, punches- hollow, wordplay- hollow, basically everything hollow. stunna give it some structure man, u had weak punches, and no commas at all, no help for us. hollow your punches were moderate. some were hard, "yo u couldnt win againts me if u knew what i was SAYIN/u think its a fuckin GAME? well u tha only nigga PLAYIN" haha that wuz nice. one i didnt like wuz "u couldnt have GAME if ya NAME was GAME/u aint no stunna/ ill light u up so u hotter then summa/im hungry can u feel my hunga?/i got things to do nigga like fuckin ya bitch in my humma" that wuz kinda weak. not bad but u got better. stunna your flow wuz off a bit too. "if u think rappin like that gonna get u somewhere u betta stop before u start cuz im already 1 at the top of the killanigga chart" not bad. give it structure and u may have pulled it off. peace
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