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Old 09-08-04, 07:29 AM   #15
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both verses need some serious elevation... especially that stunna dude!... stunna, ya whole structure is jacked up... what's supposed to rhyme? both had terrible wordplay and no real punches... hollow at least had a better structure but he needs to fix his shyt too... rhymes were elementary for both...do you read at all? sheesh... that shyt is fundamental... emphasis on the mental part!... this goes to hallow for better structure...everything else sucked
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