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Old 09-08-04, 07:34 AM   #13
Sean Gunner
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Voted For: big GZ

GZ i wuz feelin your verse. flow- GZ, punches- GZ, metas- GZ, personals- um GZ u had one, chit u tried but it didnt work, structure- was a tie, wordplay- GZ. um chit u just need to elevate, thats bout it. GZ u did good, but u could be better, i can tell. "if u think u beatin' me i'll have u lookin' down a barrel
check my record, i got no L's (NOEL) like a christmase carol//" haha i like that. "therally murderin u to the first degree/im the greatest mc/
the rappin muhummad ali what u should be callin me/" not bad. u coulda made that ali line a bit better by puttin in flow like a butterfly sting like a bee. woulda brought the lines together. return the favor.

Me vs. LEazy
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Me vs. Domino04
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=147916

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