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Old 09-08-04, 08:06 AM   #30
LEazy
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I liked this rhyme abit better. Structure was nice. Even though you didn't have that hard of punches but you still got the win in my eyes. Turnheads you need to work on your structure abit. It was kinda bad readin it cause stuff was squashed together. But you had nice idea. Keep elevatin.

Can I get da favor returned and peep my battles? L Eazy
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