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Old 09-08-04, 09:45 AM   #15
Tanto
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

nice shottaboy... good meta's and punches there was no need to explain you rymes explination enough...
good elevation

Your Scared Of What I Might Do So When I Dropped My Verse You Turned Off Your 'SCREEN'...
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nice line

vote:
structure= shotta
meta's= shotta
punches= shotta

ekademic21 alls you need is metaphores and you'll be tight, no hate-just feed back...
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