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Voted For: Yvonne
Yvonne wins.
Punches were harder hitting,structure steady, line 1+2 didnt rhyme so fuck that off, make it rhyme next time.
Elusiv G structure was shit needs to all flow like..
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all lines the same length or a liittle bit over. punches were ok bit weak.
Pz.
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