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Old 09-08-04, 08:07 PM   #17
DrasticMeasureZ
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Voted For: RymheReaper

i have to go with rhyme cause his was more deep and on point yo nice

Yo ma eyes goin red ma life goin dead ma carcuss lays ina-jail-bed
Yo spend all ma money one drugs child support how I-be-fed
// nice mayne paintin an picture believing dat u was there

I be flatlined At banks no money I be denied Try to go to college dey say im a druggy and get declined
Yo wish at a star that I quit but I take a shot and smoke sum pot
Ma body crashes full of suspence tha chances of death are imence life gon waz ma consequence
// aight da last bar was good nice, nice closa

Yo my weed smokin ass started at and AGE//
when all my pops thought my life was gonna FADE//
// its good when u talkin about life on da opener

But now I have this animal living in my MIND//
that tells me that all my drugs is takin up my TIME//
// ok nice u tumble a lil bit (off da topic)

I know my life is gonna END//
But I need to be thrown into the PIN//
// ehhhh not an good closa

so i gots to give dis to rhyme cuz he stayed on point

v-rhyme
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


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