Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS

ey yo ya linez was iight but mayn what i got to work on oh my bad

i like this dudes verse he got betta punches and shit mane
nice structure some good personals this part was tight

u my enimie so ill call u CHARLIE/but u aint no GANGSTA u more like and ANGEL so SORRY/(charlies angels)aiight SMARTY/u wanna DART ME/(as in shoot me thats how we talk in LB)

here go my ADRESS/3254 PARK AVENUE,QUEENS VILLAGE in LONG BEACH CALI ill put 17 bullets threw ya CHEST/and just wen u thote this was my rhyme this was only a PRE-TEST/so strapt on ya bullet proof VEST/u cant tuch this nigga im like ELIOT NESS/

mic
i just wasnt fillin ya shit mane and u aint have no personals