Voted For: Empire
Empire
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is dope.. some of ur punches connected.. decent personals..
Archeologist
structure is good.. flow falls off a little.. no multis.. wordplay is decent.. a few of ur punches connected.. as i used the concept u used as ur first punch a few months ago.. but anywho, good personal..
Overall
Archeologist had the better personal.. both had a good structure.. neither had multis.. Empire had the better flow.. better wordplay.. and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Empire gets my vote..
VOTE - EMPIRE
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