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Old 09-09-04, 01:06 AM   #6
~Luciano~
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takin these newbs like you, would be done with ease/
your always in my thread posting gay replys your just like a little disease/.
5/10
i make you run for your life the way i spit dangerous it makes you freeze/
drop you fast not to say to much and make you bow down on your knees/.
4/10
you thought you could take me in a flash/
but naw i took it to you like you were a old stinky bag of trash/.
2/10
im never gonna let back on this motha fucka he thinks hes a baller/
but ill make him run for his money cuz i took it and he's broke with no dollar/.
2/10
i aint the kinda playa to lock you down/
cuz i aint like a cop, cuz when they around me they make me frown/
2/10
but you remind me of a cunt bitch like a cop/
that makes me fell like nockin you up and make you drop/.
1/10

well that shit was intresting* ya punches were lame didnt connect at all u didnt have any wordplay and ya complexity wasent there and u had 0 personals and u didnt have structure so u need 2 elevate b4 u think about gettin into another battle


nigga curve ya attitude cause i know ya jealous
faggot walking around trying to stunt wearing perry ellis
5/10
so i show "no mercy" when i crack down on wack emcees
hollow tips blow through ya head leave ya skull all empty
5/10
desert eagle throw slugz thru ya fitted
lyrics leave stains on ya career like i just shitted
5/10
u trying to pull a win on me u dumb fuck
head shot so gruesome cops cover ya face like young buck
5/10
from letting lead fly my heater stays hot
and leaves white lines around ya ass like a acme parking lot
5/10
when u see me u better stand up like a field of crops
and u still couldn't win if u had michael jordan take ya last shot
5/10

ya punches were ok and ya complexity was ok ya structure was kinda onpoint but it made it look kinda stretched and atleast u had some personals in there wasent a really good drop but it was better than your opponents
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