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Old 09-09-04, 08:06 AM   #16
Soulless
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Voted For: Livin Legend

punches- LL
wordplay LL
flow- tie
solid disses- LL

mostly one sided upfront you need to stick to the structure that is easier to read and see punches...
and please no (ha) after ur own lines cuz if its funny the reader will laugh.... but overall decent battle LL took this

vote/ LL
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