K1ll@mic:
Your verse was aight...I could tell it was keyed because you used so many played out concepts..you made attempt at personals and had punches but they werent hitting hard...and you closed your verse out with a "cum" line...Ask any emcee anywhere in the world and theyll tell you a cum line is the most played concept ever...its horrible and displays a lack of skill when yo resort to suck wackness...flow aight...bar structure threw me off a lil...
Overall:3.0/10

Tricksta:
you had an alright verse yourself...flow was better...wordplay was incredibly forced...your verse wasnt as complex but the punches were better...you should try to use more punchline sin your verse than just forcing wordplay like that becuase a lot of those lines didnt make much sense...enough of them did though...
Overall:3.5/10