damn sorry it took me so long to check out ya piece havent been on ina while..

I definitly was feelin it, good concept, and I like the way you ended it.. It had good emotion and pretty good flow... try using more similes and metaphors to add more to the imagry...

overall this was a nice piece though.. Keep spitin and elevatin...


...Peace...

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