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Old 09-09-04, 06:35 PM   #11
Ice Pick
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Voted For: String9487

Vote string better flow, content , delivery of punches and way better use of the personal at the end of ya verse
im slick wit the flow, i talk greasey to win
a lose dont bother dude, cuz "L"s are "EAZY" for him
That was a pretty nice closer


LEAZY, work on your structure and your punches are ok but seem all over the place or misdirected,,,,,Or either that been said to many times..
ALSO guntalk and murder hurt your verse......
No beef but you are gettin better,,,,,


Hit this UP FOR ME
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=145755
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