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I'm High.
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IP:
Voted For: TURBAN
Turbans Verse
this is round 2 n i'm `one for oh
you rap round here like you a scary ho
3/10 could be better
droppin like you think you hot
but heres a hint you'll never be a pac
10/10 good personals
and its another attack on society
from the verbal stanza's of the "great mystery"
you sketchy like ja rules history
8/10 nice!
you claim to pop guns whats that about ,
when you couldnt even figure the fucking trigger out
8/10 haha
more like a novice, a simplistic, i bet some village is missing there idi-ot
you cant be legitimate , when you this wack
and its another win a verbal attack
this isnt the outback, and your not kangaroo jack
8.5/10 nice multis and punches
so gimme one last laugh, and on behalf of the rv community
this is one game where you wont get immunity
6/10 nice..outtro
8.5/10Good overall flow punches, easy to read structure, and some multis
2pacs verse
k turban her we go again dis is part 2 ill murder u like a goddamn jew/listen bitch last time we rapped u beat me but its coo/next time u win ima sue/ill leave u like da bitch u are in dis rap ill beat u by far/ ill make sure u aint got teeth to "spit" with when i beat u with a crow bar/bitch ill leave u like a hoe on ricky lake/ claimin your baby daddy's a fake/ damn dog nows tha time to wittness your rap fate/ ill rub u off like what i do when i masterbait/ nigga this aint rhymeing dis is mother fucking street rap/ ill leave u feeling like crap/bitch u rap like my ass sounds like/ nigga ill leave u breathless/when i rap im wreakless/nigga i got u rapped round this rap like my necklace/
2/10 ur structure was fucked, ok flow, personals but NO creativity anywas 2pac this is adequate feedback if u didn't know.. :|
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