Voted For: untouchablekilla
you took it,
untouchablekilla- you had better all around punches word play ,and over all creativity, the punches were very secure, and didnt have that many faults, you had a good choice of vocab as well
wise wun- you need to elevate a little more you gots some talent jus work on your structure and not stretch'n things out, also get a better vocab , cuz untouchable killa had you there,
vote//untouchablekilla
i dropped an honest vote now its ur turn
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ayo peaceout