Voted For: Empire

Vote: Empire

Empire: good structure, liked the metaphors especially the second line, good punches, good personals, not really any multi's but u still got my vote

Schema: good structure, had a few metas, not many multi's either, good punches, ok personal but i felt u could have a came a bit harder

no beef, both of ya did great

return the honest vote: Livin Legend vs Infector Mindz
Livin Legend vs realistnicca386, Livin Legend vs Mc *Maze*,
Livin Legend vs Snook

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