this was... bad dawg, seriously, your vocab was pretty good... except for the sounds and rhyming, unless you shit on the thesaurus and its pronounciation and expect people to know the shit you rhyming... then this was just like a essay, yeah, lack of logic was right, this is a piece of knowledge from the... whatever he said, no doubt with better wordplay, it could sound a hell of a lot better, maybe even flow, you had nice fillers, but what i was talking about earlier in this reply is... your end rhymes were shot, peace 'n' keep spitting


signed,
~madd