Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

Aight

sultan: youve got potential... fix ya structure though man... Seriously, ya flow was there, but really hard to see.. And ya vocab is aight but you need to word ya shit better.. like i got it but i had to think n shit n it was kinda far fetched.. plus peeps always say the punches that need explainin are the weakest, unless they personal...

Ill: LoL at ya opener and that scooby shit... and that "stuck in a screen" line was nice.. flow was good, then got better in the last stanza, at the cost of punches... But ya punches in the first paragraph were wreckin him, so its all good... liked ya closer..

Yo Ill, drop me a PM sometime.. gotta catch up

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