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Old 09-10-04, 12:00 PM   #16
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Voted For: Sultan

decent battle i guess.

sultan your verse would look alot better if ya took all the ()//"" < characters out of it..makes it easier to read, and helps on the enjoyment..

also, fix your rhyme scheme up, because it seems like theyre all over the place..

punches- sultan (some creative ones)
personals- none, really..
werdplay- sultan.
flow- tie.
multis- ?
vote- sultan..

decent battle.

drop an honest vote here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148270
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