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Old 09-10-04, 12:16 PM   #28
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I'm Spittin These Bars Before U Even Look Down To TYPE..
I'ma Leave You Buried 'Underground' Like Some 'Unsigned HYPE'..
decent..

Lets See How U Deal Wit The 'ART OF INVENTION'..
U Wouldnt Drop Somthin ''Cruel'' Even If U Had The 'INTENTION'
eeeh forced.... kinda weak....

Ya Record States 0-0 So U A Battle VIRGIN...
Ask The Peoples There Was Only Ever Once Emcee EMEREGIN..!
ending was weak as-well.....

4.0 u was lacking alot in this verse what happen i thought u was better.....

next....

Battlin Me..It's Like Fucking Prostitutes, You're In To Loose |lose|
Am A Technician Coz I'll Break Ur Screws, N UR Like Payless..Coz U Can't Fill My Shoes..
not a bad start...

Like Bad Water Systems I'mma Break This Dyke, So Call Me A Slugger.Quick To Strike..
Must B Lefty Coz Yer Verses Never Right.N Like Bad Internet I'll Leave U Outta Site..
preety good...

Always Blaze-Hits..Like A Surgeon Imma Give This Kid A Facelift..
Fuckin Up Bitches, Coz In This Battle, I'll Be Commin' On Top Like A Rapist..

nice ending......

more complex more harder punches, nice flow...

7.9 not a bad verse.... preety sick...