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Old 09-10-04, 02:03 PM   #9
Ice Pick
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Voted For: WORDPLAYA

Vote wordplaya

FOr personal line about the ludacris NUTS , better flow, better structure, closer and opener,

get off 'Ludacris' nuts bitch go head n 'Stand Up'
ridin dick like a roller coaster rides wit yo hands up
Dope

already started off bad stealin names u not from da south
So do like yo idol u fuckin faggot it's bout time u ROLL OUT
Dope

LUDACRIS, basic rymes, nothing stood out. punches wernt hard and they werent even close to being good. up your vocab and use of wordplay and you could get better

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