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Old 07-10-02, 09:44 AM   #14
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•madd•Professor•

- the reason i say tied ropes cuz... for you this battle is a struggle/

Nice opening.

- flow flow drool spit slobber free-ly, i hope you win cuz... no one should be able to not beat me/

Why are you dissing yourself?

darkplanet

- Wow... i neva new it could b so nasty to watch yha blood spill//
- BUt a boy like me will kill at will so jus chill and pop a pill//
- THe only twist you got in yha head is from my drill//

Decent opening. But try not to keep using words like "spill", "pill", "drill". Try and get some more complex rhymes in.

- SO id suggest..that you pack up yha kindergarden rhymes and move on the double//

Made me laugh.

I think darkplanet edged this battle slightly. His punches were a bit more fluent.

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