Voted For: Unrealghost

unreal you took it ,

you had all around better punches, the flow was alittle off but u could both use a lot more work, but i enjoyed reading it

punches//ug
personals//none
meta's//sorta ug
structure//ug

20 grand your was alright jus work on your structure and your flow a little more

vote// unrealghost

this battle was a quick one so drop a vote

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