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Old 09-10-04, 09:53 PM   #13
fluidmoon
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Voted For: Livin Legend

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livin legend~nice verse, you had good flow and structure, you hit hard here, i liked your wordplay and multies, very strong, compared to your opponent, i think you were a little more creative with your verse as well, i liked the opening bar and the closing bars, and you never fell off from beginning to end......nice job
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