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This is iLL, the concept was explored well and the ideas were delivered well, some of the lines were strong and powerful mos of this caught my eye... Both of ya combined well, I know Symmetrik and Peepers I seen you on ES* board... The flow was nice, multies were strong and provided you with the rhythm, some internal rhymes helped the flow stay on point, and nothing was choppy... Vocab was always there, the language helped with the imagery and the knowledge words were nice... Wordplay was on point, liked the ideas that come out of here, everything worked together to produce a decent and solid piece, keep dropping the gems...
Peez...
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