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Old 07-10-02, 11:26 AM   #9
RhetoriX
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The knowledge in this was iLL, and something that caught my eye, it was quite interested in some places especially with the wordplay coming through... The flow was on point, multies and some internal rhymes were strong, it flowed well and was quite flawless... The vocab was the strongest point, and you used knowledge words to combine with the wordplay, that was nice, it worked well together and produced some imagery which was good to see... The only complaint I would say, it was some what tedious, I dont think it was powerful enough and it aint something you wanna read again, na'mean... need some concepts to spit about, but this was solid and decent... Keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...
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