Not bad for a free, there were both good points and bad points to this... The rhythm was sturdy and combined with multies didnt come choppy, more internal rhymes woulda made it nice... The vocab was working sometimes, a lot of words were repeated, so expand your vocab slightly and use a deeper knowledge... Wordplay was aight, I think more punches shoulda been thrown in a piece like this, noticed some similes here and there, as its quite a battle verse thats what your looking for... Its a solid piece, aint bad, keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...