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Voted For: Empire
Archs one of the best to post around this place..
Empire was on his way up...
.....until i kicked my boot in the face..*
3/10
See its easy to diss with a link or a quote, dont like it do you?..
See you out of it before you got hear..
........Bcus you were already seeing two of you..**
1/10
Crack this Kid in the Jaw so your spittin threw the wire...
i just beat the winning streak...
............So call me the King of this Empire..
2/10
Punches were weak and ya wordplay was simple basically it was a horrible drop u need 2 elevate before u even think about accepting another battle
He cant 'measure' he under 'pressure' like a shook up can of soda
'Bastard' must have CHESS 'mastered' all them rooks in ya folder(1)
3/10
Fix ya 'words' aling ya 'verbs' and get all ya lame personals down(2)
Could'nt 'win' unless you use mod powers and 'spin' our verse around(3)
2/10
You 'played' getting 'a.i.ds' from ya homo lover only way youll ever be ill
You 'whacked' and battle 'stats' is 'facts' so what vets did you kill?(4)
5/10
punches were played and simple and ya wordplay was ok and so was ya complexity overall it wasent a very good drop but u won cuz ya comp dropped even worse
overall both of u could use some elevation and some more clever ORIGINAL punches and that would help both of ya drops come off alot more better
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