Yeh this was nice a free, a lot like a tongue twister, the first coupla bars made it powerful and strong... I liked the rhythm it was quicc, internal rhymes wordking with the multies and it showed through with a good flow... The vocab was iLL throughout, powerful, hard hitting words and phrases, you structured your sentences well... Wordplay was always working, a lot of similes, more punches woulda made this a flawless piece, but you still impressed... The only thing that it lacced was substance, aint something you wanna read again, but im feeling it mos def... Keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...