LACK OF LOGIC -
BUT THERE IS NO WAY YOU ARE A RAPPER USING POET STANZA TO WRITE RHYMES IN YOU BEEN EDUCATED IN THIS BEFORE

Erm, imma bit confused with that remark... Poetry is more stretched out bars, no sharp rhythm, thats my style I write with and this has been written to a beat, so im not sure what you mean by that... I aint a poet or you would prolly see me in the poetry section, but I can write poetry...

JOeY TeRRIFYING -
what were ya trying to say with it. i realy didnt find a message behind your peice

I think it was quite obvious, theres many lines to suggest what this is about, that was the whole point of me saying, read into this... This is for first verse...

One word Sun, this Earth cant hack it,
Peace That’s it, 5 Letters,
“EE AAY”, Topics and Metas of Thinking Acid…
Afghanistan felt the Weaponry,
Expanding the Technology past Man,
Clearing Lives, Sewing Hearts across the Land,
Who needs Knives? When Countries are punishing in Grand’s

But Remember, never to Count your Chickens up…
^ That line suggests, dont think it wont happen cos it might...

It does need to be read properly... I think that makes it quite obvious... I shouldnt be explaining it, but it is simple, you dont need to be a brain surgeon to see it... You should read into the lines sun... Thanks and Appreciated for the critique though... Keep em coming...

Peez...