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Old 09-11-04, 01:22 AM   #17
Ice Pick
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Voted For: Empire

Empire got this shit with,

better opener, better punches, use of wordplay and personals....

Not 'hot' occupation the 'block' man why you dont stop fronting(2)
You 'weak' yous a 'legend in the street' at dick riding and cock sucking(3)
that was fire

No 'struggling' claim you 'hustling' on the block moving that crack work(4)
But yous a 'joke' real hustlers woulnt even be 'broke' on rap verse(4)
That was also pretty nice shit

Street legeng, not bad use of words, punches could have been harder, structure could be better, personals could have been alot better.... Nothing in your verse hasnt been said before, no hate JUST ELEVATE

i think you was born to infuriate, niggas annoyed wit ya post
this fruit is "sweet" in simplest terms he's infested wit "glucose"
that was ya only descent line

VOTE EMPIRE

hit this up BOTH OF YA


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