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Old 09-11-04, 09:38 AM   #20
Terumoto
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I wasnt feelin either of ya flows.. its not that they were bad, they were nice, didnt fall off, all good n shit.. But im like.. multis.. so i dont judge on flow, i judge on content..

schema:
good shit... had madd personals.. lol.. nice wordplay where there was any -_-

Empire:
those 's were confusing.. i was lookin for wordplay innem, but they were just ya inners --__-- ... Nice punches though.. liked ya opener and the bar after that. verse was more enjoyable to read than schemas. n i felt it came a little harder..

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