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Old 09-11-04, 09:52 AM   #19
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Voted For: Cho-Kahn MiWang

ok... Cho had a better rhyme... beat was wack.... delivery wasn't so hot... verse was within the time limit set... fix ya levels... voice was in and out on the track... adlibs were barely audible... sounded like you was tryna do ya verse low and too close to the mic ...like you was trying not to wake ya moms up or sum'n... ok... i've heard better though

Prem... real choppy verse... sounded ol' skool... tried to force ya self to stay on the beat... (beat was nice... I actually own that instrumental)... verse was too short... nice projection of ya voice... coulda won this with a better rap... everthing was there except the verse.
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