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Old 09-11-04, 10:33 AM   #10
TURBAN
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From: MPLS,MN
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Voted For: Jay-Z

hahaha, yours made me laugh.

I;ll Kill-herbs .. With Illwords.. And My Lyrical Spits
nice opener ^8/10
Son, The Only Time U Beatin "whites".. Is Cumin With Ya Dick
funny ass shit right there ^9/10
& Shit.. Im Living My Life.. Ripping The Ice.. And Smoking Dro..
eh a lil weak^5/10
Ayo I Lost My Fone.. Wait It's In Ludacrisses Afro!
^4/10
Ya Fucking Wid Jigga.. Da Nigga? Who's The Best Vet..
I Seen Better Drop's Than Yours In The Toilet....
^8/10

6.8/10

luda luda on da myk diss this battle down to da ground//
this bitch thinks his rich coz he found a penny in a mound//
hes calls himself j-z hes not even gonna get 1 word in lyk he wud//
ill slap da nigga to da ground get the basterd face andput it in da mud//
i dotn lyk gay thats y im taking them all out 1 by 1 i will shout i win//
this battle has only just opend but soon as we drop it will be closed in a min//
basterd basterd on da myk rapping his wack rhymes thinking his bad//
im winning this cunt 4-0 up he nos im gonna win so hes getting mad//
gay gay gay guy wus up u got beat its called gay got defeat//
theres a gay guy on da corner waiting 4 u 2 to meet//
my m8 said he seen u in da gay bar basterd bar n loads more hes seen u kissing the gay guys dick//
we not u want to have it off in da gay bar u no u want to steal micks dick n then lick//

you got a 4/10 jus cuz it wasnt as hard as jay's

metas// jay
punches/jay
flow//jay
structure/luda
personals/jay n luda
score/jay

opener closer/jay

winner/jay

drop an honest vote .. its in my sig

luda u can do alot better jus dont stretch ya rhymes out so much, and hit them harder